Sleep: Night One Commentary

Hey there. Sleep, is our first entry into our short story outlet. As you can see from the post, the visuals that are implemented really plant a picture in your mind as the you read along. We've thought about putting an audio version, along with the written post, so that the full effects can be experienced. What would you suggest? Written only or a written and an audio version underneath to be played by at the reader's discretion? Let's us know what you think. Later.